Really good=)

Aww!!!....so sad!!!!!..i love it!..u did an awsum job on this!!..wow!..good job!
Aly
5/5

Its sad but i love it <33

Aww. i can relate. beautiful flow and choice of words. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

..nice work..5/5:)

Your love resembles John Keats' love for Fanny. I am reminded of his lines:

Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live ever or else swoon to death.

Very nice...i liked it a lot! :)

Thank you for writing this poem. now I know that it's not just a woman that hurts, but men do too. 5/5

Wonderful job! I love it. Thanks for sharing!

Awwwwww how sad :(

mwah

This poem was awesome, and lately this is what I am thinking too. It's the exact same thing, but I cant get these things wrote down on paper. haha. Still loved it. I read some of your other poems too, and I thought that they were good, your an awesome writer.

Awwwwwww sad..... thats like so touching... but mayb it wasnt you... it was her....
good poem... keep it up mwa xo

baby

Awwwwwww sad..... thats like so touching... but mayb it wasnt you... it was her....
good poem... keep it up mwa xo

baby

Hey man many of us feel the exact same way ur poem describes... 5 star poem dude.

I like this poem...
im sorry you have to feel this way, the same thing is tearing me apart right now. and id write about it if i could get the words right. each line is really short, but i like how it rhymes. if they were longer theyd flow better, but otherwise it's a nice job.
<3sarah lynn

I like this, im dealing with the same things and id write about it if i could get the words right. the lines are a lil short and may flow better if they were longer, but i like it all the same. nice job!

<3 sarah lynn

Wow i love this one...5/5

This is a beautiful poem from a mans perspective 5/5

TO ALL THE POETS.............ALMOST 7000 PEOPLE HAVE READ THIS POEM, BUT ONLY 14 VOTES. WHY WHY WHY. STOP COMPETING AND START PRAISING

Baby that wont happen wen im around... u will always have a hole hart plus my hart... baby i love u