Love this sooo much! You are a seriously amazing writer and I'm looking forward to more! As usual :P
5/5
~FountainsOfBlood

Beautifully written yet so sad 5/5 indeed

Sad & nice poem. love the last line.

"ill make her mine somehow"
has a lot of meaning to it

Aw i like this bunches =]

Cute... you reali like the girl.... can tell... i guess you'll get her some day... u'll find your perfect girl...

keep it up
baby

That is something i could relate to in the past now my depression is if he loves me or not great poem I went through this......5-5

Flowed perfectly
liked the line:I'm dreaming of her
shes dreaming of him
so what do I do now
-once again-5/5

Awsome just awsome!...5/5
= )

Good job onces again!!! = p