Great poem i really liked it. Its so meaningful and true and i really liked it i just cant describe it lol. Anyways great poem keep it up :)

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This poem is truely amazing filled with emotions and err thing else...
5/5
Excellent Job!!!

I love it I love it bravo bravo

Oh god! well we are all aware for what's happening in africa and it's a sign for those who dont believe that life is unfair.
The poverty the wars all these harmful things must be solved as soon as possible then I'm sure all this pain will fade away... I know it's quit hard to fix this situation but all we got is to pray...
Anyway I really love the way you described the situation in your country it shows how painful the situation is, and your words helped me to feel things that I have never felt... keep it up... hope things will get better!

Thanks for your comment and I really liked this poem hope to be reading more of your poems

Another very well written poem your feelings in your writing is so touching

Up and around this streets i stare,
down this haunted streets where i was reared,
here another soul met the gunmans fire,
and yet nobody ever seems to care.

*This was my favorite stanza. I feel lik you are telling me a very personal story from the heart. you emotions are pure and clearly expressed throughout the whole piece. Very nice work. Nik*

Your poem is very touching..