Woo awesome..!!

A really deep felt and sincere write. Sorry are the only words that can be said and yet forgiveness makes one the greatest of people. I love the flow of this one and also the ease with which your words and lines seem to correlate with each other. Keep it up and thank you for the comment. 5/5 from my side

Wow this is amazing
and really deep
Keep writting your very good :)
5/5

It's really interesting but in stanza 8 you said sorry 2 times was it deliberate. I like the expression " smiling to apper strong". Keep it up.

GREAT!!! nice...
LOVE IT!!

I loved reading this poem!Totally amazing.And if its really what you feel-then you should be my soul mate,cause i also lost someone who was really precious to me...This poem goes to my fav list :)

P.S.Correct the mistake in "But Don't You know?i think you mean so.