Great job i really liked it especially this part

if someone would look in your eyes would they see
the crazy life building up inside of me
or would they just smile as if they didn't know
and if they did would they let is show.
or do i where a mask which no one can see
which is invisible but hides the real me.

I liked this cuz it reminds me of me because i usually wear this smile on my face and noone sees whats really happening inside of me. They all think that my life is perfect not knowing that its wayyyy beyond that point .

Anyways great job :)