Thank you very much :) . my poems are usually impossibly to understand, its about a man who can't see what things really are, his life of lonliness and torment leads him to see thinks in a different perspective.

very well written, kinda random, but hey those are the best right? alrighty keep up the amazing work!
~Darkness

You had some good words in there but it didn't seem to flow too much good try though...