Comments : The Bitter Truth

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    'live today to the fullest'
    The whole poem was very well written ,but it was these words that stood out the most for me...I try to live everyday to the fullest ...not only cos my kids are growing up fast and I want to cherish every moment with them but because life is an unknown road and we don't what may be around the corner.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Cool man,
    "Bother not for what you have taken
    was it worth what you gave & lost today?
    Even a big frown from you
    made my biggest worries smile today.

    Are you afraid you may die someday
    I m giving you my life today
    But the bitter truth we cannot escape
    So live today to the fullest as you have lived yesterday."

    you have great poems, i should check more

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    So live today to the fullest as you have lived yesterday.. i liked that part alot. i liked how just a few words like that can mean so much with a great meaning! u did a very good job on this write keep it up! 5/5 always
    Kate~