This wa so sad and very well written. I loved it.

Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it alot!

The imagery here just blew me away and you expression of emotions was just flawless and effective in getting the message across. The flow was just great because everything fit in nicely with nothing seeming forced. The repitition was great and added strength .. power to the poem which made it even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

I really liked the repetition in this poem. I think it added to the emotion. Made me sad. 5/5

I thought this was beautiful, very well written, i really felt it as i read it. 5/5.

Wow I just couldn't stop reading this! It was really good. You deff have to keep writing.
once again nice job. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

One mistake n u r left all alone... how true these words are..

Lovely poem yet again..

Keep it up