Great job, i really liked it full of emotion. you really got your point out there. 5/5

The line "should i say their name?" should be "should I say their names?"

Except that ^^ small error, I really enjoyed in this poem. I think that you picked great topic to write about, truly meaningful and conveyed the message of the whole piece on a great way. All in all, I like your choice of words in each stanza and the flow is excellent through the whole poem. The repetition of the line "Cry me a river that shows only pain," added fantastic effect to the flow and atmosphere of this poem.
The ending is also effective, it sums up your opinion on the topic greatly. You should capitalize 'I' in that last line.
Overall, greatly done.
5/5 from me

I love it! It's a great poem!