by Blissful
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Wow this was just so heartbreaking to read because I could relate with the emotions you expressed. Your writing style is different and was refreshing to read something new on this site. The second stanza had to be my fave because you described everything so nicely that you had me hooked. |
by Meme
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Wow really amazing poem |
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I love this one it is sad but wonderful it made me cry cause I can relate to it so much |
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SO sad n powerful poem.... Good one again |
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You did a wonderful job of showing your readers your emotions instead of telling them. Keep up the good writing. |
by katie99
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This is a good poem i can relate keep up the nice work |
by heartachexxx
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I love this poem |
by Allisha
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I looove this poem. |
by Quniqwa
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This is a very good poem! This is my favorite one ! |
by moonlil
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Wow, its great. It has a nice flow. |