Still he yets to hear you
even when your screaming his name in the dead of night
you wake up crying because after all it was just a dream
thats me as well and i am so sorry if your going through even half of what im going through no it sdoesnt hurt it stings one bit at a time intel it eats you alive
hi im Brandi nice to meet you

Dreams do come true, great write

all the best and take care

You're poem is up and down. I think that you really have a lot of emotion behind this poem. There is a great deal of emotion in each and every word.

This is a really great poem. I just feel that the syllables are up and down, you have a huge line coupled with a small line. I know that you do it as a release, just a little tidbit of information. Then you go from two lines to four, then two, then one. Just a little bit of 411 to help you improve.

Awesome poem, I gave it a five, because it mirrors a lot of our thoughts.

Thank you Brandi =) ,Dark savior and End of Eternity =)) thnx ;)

Loveee it gurl! =)