Comments : Silent Chaos

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is very typical, a poem based on the things i experience many at times " after a days chaos then night comes............... The brilliant sun rises bringing with it chaos once more " you poem is short but kinda describes everything that happens during that time.. Nicely penned.. Good work keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Well writen! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, day in day out. like you say happens to us all. good work hun xx keep writing xx