A Very Sad Poem, But I Like It.
Keep It Up.
5/5

Nice poem

LoL losterr! I like this one a lot too! Keep it upppp.

Good poem

It was good, but if i were you id change a few things... to make it easier to read.
I had to reread it again to actually get the poem, because of the way it was written.. maybe try writing out the words you abbreviated, "u" ="You" things like that, it helps the flow, and its just easier to read.