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  • 17 years ago

    by Kylee

    That is really good i think it's so good because it is relatable.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, thats pretty amazing stuff, really good well doen xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    This really amazing. I love how you had it for both gender's because most people think it's just girls.It was honest and emotional.You have talent.A well-deserved 5/5.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 17 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Thnx guys!!! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by she

    Yay you finally added more poems lol
    this was really true, and deep

  • 17 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Another beautiful poem, i love how you bring the two together at the end, and it was an excellent choice to use caps and exclamation points after the NOT OKAY part because this whole poem is screaming I'm not okay!!! Beautifully written, 5/5