Aw. this gave me tears..it's so sweet...

in the morning and you feel the warm sun feel my kiss,
know that its you all day i miss.

^ love it. would be a definite comfort for him, girly. i love it, adn you. great job. *hugs*

5.5

This is soo good and sweet! i love what you can do with love poems! you rule them!

Aww i agree with the other comments above this poem is very sweet
Great job
=]

This is a sweet poem it puts a smile on my face! 5/5 keep it up! ^_^

Seems like a nursey ryhme! Something a mother would tell her child, but this a NR to a lover!

5/5
the Raven