"But what the hell happens when I look front"
"But what the hell happens when I look ahead"

I really did like this poem, as you see there was only one thing that I noticed needed changing. However, I didn't really like the repetitiveness that much. I think that every other line was a bit much, maybe taking it down to once a stanza or something? That's just my taste though, not anyone else's.

Good poem. :]

Sorry that I didn't realize that before, I always check over a second time. usually I notice it all the first time but this wasn't the case.

"I see you doing all the stuff you did for me to another girl "

Maybe try: "I see you doing all the stuff you did with me to another girl"