Comments : Strike a Match, Silence a Voice, It Smells Like Gasoline

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    For one thing, i hate the smell of gasoline, so i actuallly didn't want to read this poem. The smell brings back a lot of things that i don't want to think of. so i was already tearin up, just reading the flipping title..

    Looking at the pictures
    Whats the worst thing you can say?
    You don't belong in those pictures
    Your invisible anyway

    You don't belong with anything
    You don't belong TO anyone
    You will be forgotten
    When this poem's done

    ^ it's so unfair..how i can't convince you otherwise..how i'm so helpless and useless that i can't show you that you will never be invisible..

    great poem jesse..made me cry ((please don't PM me asking why))

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Wow...i really like it and it didnt confuse me one bit!!! luv the new name by the way!!! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Nope,not confusing:
    Looking at the pictures
    Whats the worst thing you can say?
    You don't belong in those pictures
    Your invisible anyway
    -sad