"With every breath I take,
Is how many times my heart you broke,
With every step I make,
Is how many times in tears I got soaked..."

^wow. this is so good
you're extremely talented. i loved this poem. u rly put ur whole heart into this one. 5/5

Aw! this was so sad.
It was written beautifully!
Some of it rhymed while some didnt, but i absolutly loved it anyways. im not really a person that writttes to rhyme. but anyways u wrote this beautifully. it was sad. im sorry u didnt get her.
"*in tears*
For so long have I admired her,
Hugged her in my sleep as if she was there,
Looked at the mirror as if she's behind me,
Sat under the shade of a tree as if she's leaning on me... "
^^my fav. stanza. it expresses your grief the most in thi stanza.

Great job!
Aly