Nice written
Biya

"The carcass that was a smiling flower yesterday
sadly reminds me today
that it is no more
it's fragrance is no more."
=> This made me cry. If you once taste something sweet you will always remember it. If I would not have ever love someone so much I would be happier about some love what is not so powerful... But when you taste something so good it will only make you feel sad later...to compare it.. How lucky are the people who never lost the taste of sweet love...they don't know what have missed...

"The carcass that was a smiling flower yesterday
sadly reminds me today
that it is no more
it's fragrance is no more."
=> This made me cry. If you once taste something sweet you will always remember it. If I would not have ever love someone so much I would be happier about some love what is not so powerful... But when you taste something so good it will only make you feel sad later...to compare it.. How lucky are the people who never lost the taste of sweet love...they don't know what have missed...

Aww thats good work xxxxxxx

Nice, you are write. I found here some one like me.
good work

Beautifully written sad poem! :(
Loved it!
5/5
....Melody....