I love that *ha ha ha ha*
it adds a comical effect

Wow i really like this

Wow,
i really like this poem
i enjoyed it great job 5/5... :D

This is really nice...and dark...5/5 for sure! but i think u forgot the word one after no in the first sentence haha

btw thanx alot 4 ur comments on my poems =] they r must appriciated