Your poem is written really well and I have no critiques for it.

Truley i agree it is written very. well i liked Bravo!

Wow! I really liked this one. It was so sad but very deep. One of your best. Keep it up S.A =] 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Your beautiful, i wish you could see that.
kirstina, you are. but this is great no needed improvment i see to point out. 5/5

Wow! this is awesome! very well written
with deep clear emotion!
5/5