I think its good "Not Finished"
you dont always have to have a set "ending" to make a point.
and this poem shows that.
great job!

5/5

<3
XxAshleyxX

Its good so far, i think you should finish it, its good xx

I agree with Ashley, there are some things/poems that does not have an end.

Nice one...

5/5

Even tho its not finished i still like this poem.. thnx 4 commentin mine 2
love love xx

Good write... keep writing...