Aww. touching and sad. beautiful!

Dear sister y did tears roll out of my eyez... I dont know... N I just imagined how u may hav felt at that time...

N I cud have told u wat number it is.. as I too do not know... Infinity...

Sumtimes u dont find wordz... But I think this was d best of all your poems I remember n i read...

N Itz ur 99th..

Best of luck for your 100th poem....

Best wishez...

Big bro... Karan;)

Salam my sister noor.....

this poem is beyond touching.....it hit my heart as the innocence of a childs mind is surely disrupted with reality.....and it usually happens much to quick.

this poem brought tears to my eyes.....

well done.

ma'sallama
salwa

Dreams are forged into one's mind but is it really true that society breaks those dreams? If its a dream you believe and wish to achieve than nothin, not even society can stop you. Its innocence and ignorance that also shatters our perfect dreams. None the less an exquisite and wonderful write delvin deep into the minds of the innocent. 5/5

Noor this poem is really very touching , I love it ! Especially in the last stanza the definition you gave of society is really very true

When we were children, we had 100 dreams
They were colorful and beautiful
full of sparkling, creativity, candy floss, crayons
but this society wanted to grow us to be part of it
It killed our 99 beautiful dreams of childhood
so we would never create new inventions
So that we would blend in the system called "society".

Keep writing ..its a nice piece of work!
5/5
cheers
Biya

This is a really good poem, excellent choice to write about, true, and amazingly penned. You've got quite a few grammatical errors, and I'm not going to detail them all in here, just go over it and use the side of you that is english, you know you have one! :P otherwise, this is an amazing poem. Great job.

A mind blowing poem.It is really one of the best poems I have ever read.In our childhood we are so innocent that we just cant think beyond our imagination and consider only those things right which we feel thae are right.But as we grow old society makes us realize that truth is different and quite contrary to what we had thought.In fact It is the only job of society to oppose an individual and break his dream for its own benefit.I have written on the same theme.Plz have a look at my poem"Yearning For Bygone Days".good job

Wow ... such a beautiful picture you've painted here, well written & beautifully penned..5/5

I know my comments will pale in comparision to some of those already written about your piece but I found your emotions and words well picked and placed. I think we all can relate to the 100 dreams, I still hold on to many and have managed to live out a few. Nice....

This was a nice and creative I like this one 5/5 ",

When i first began reading this poem it seemed fine in the beginning, but it turned to be a stunning master piece when i read this line

"One of my colorful dreams died"

I never actually thought of it that way, THANK YOU
for giving me a new perspective in life

Peace,
Mohamed

This is a really good write. Not only is it most certainly true, its also emotional.
This is what society does to us. Its pressure, its stress, and is all about what you can see with your eyes. I remember what It was like to see with my mind.
Society strips us of the ability to imagine.
No imagination, all mindless nonesence!

Straight to the point.

Love it :D

Wow, that was brilliant. The idea of this poem is just great and it is so true. Looking back at all the dreams we once used to have, we realize now that we have most of them if not all of them. You've done a wonderful job with this poem.
5/5

Wonderful, i relly liked this one Noor, this happens really, sometimes they kill our childhood imagination by putting strict human-made rules