Comments : Stevie

  • 16 years ago

    by sleepybear

    A very sad but very well structured poem about a a tragic and wasted life.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is a very moving poem of yours Ed, about someone who has just died inside, and are helpless to do anything about it.There are many people like this out there in a world that has become hard and cold, and short on love. I liked this poem a lot, and ur style of writing, it just draws the reader in!