Please comment on my poems you read

HHEEYY i read this one in your journal thing when i was at your house.... i like the ending:

If I'm over you
why do I still write your name in a heart?
If I'm over you
why do I feel like my hearts being ripped apart?
If I'm over you
why don't I feel better?
If I'm over you
why am i still writing this letter?

That part ^^. its cute... great poem cousin of mine!!! 5/5