Oh, this lovely coffin
a hidden tomb of pain
Reader, shall we open it?
or is that what makes mortals insane?
-ha kinda funny, like it!

Lovely. Dark. Mystrious. Questioning.

Enchanting. like hard core. nice :)

"But listen close on the whispered wind
can you hear her childish laugh?
oh, these beautiful porcelain eyes
they held so much joy in the past

Too bad Lover killed her
broke her oaken heart
funny how tragic endings
become beautiful starts"

These are great poetic lines, no less than a poetic genius cold write them. I salute your poetic talent and wish that you reach the crowning glory of the poets. Rhyme, rhythm, aliteration and diction, all are superb.

Really good poem. Keep writing.5/5

WoOw !! Amazing. Cant say more you really amazed me with this poem. From the beginning to the end every word and every rhyme was simply perfect.

"Too bad Lover killed her
broke her oaken heart
funny how tragic endings
become beautiful starts"

You have a great talent and I agree with Sharma you are a genius poet.
5/5