Comments : Our Friendship

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Friendships are our greatest treasures. You have captured this in each line you have written. The joy friends give you is brought to mind by the beauty you see around you.

    When the night dawns
    Under the star studded firmament
    I seek -
    being with a Friend....

    The last stanza of your poem really touches the heart. In times we are alone it is the comfort of a true friend we wish for.
    Good job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I can tlly relate to this poem I just transferred to a new skool this year and miss my friends very much! :) good job!Another favorite of yours! :) 5/5