please rate my poem so i can see where I go right and can you please rated as well thank very much

Aww this was so sweet! :) I loved it. Thank you for the comment, take care & keep writing!

-God bless you! <3

GREAT POEM LOVED IT ITS DOWN TO THE POINT KEEP IT UP

This is a really goood poem. i like it a lot =)
kasia 5/5