I liked the whole poem. it was painted nicely with sad and confused soul.

each stanza has it's own uniqueness

well done

am always here if you wanna talk

Wow this is really good and my friend though so too.

I love it...

keep writing

This poem showz ur attachment to sumone special... N I hope wen one among both is down itz d other who holds ur moral & spirit high.. right..?

Ya sumtimes d world feels we r more than strong enough n comment we do not feel or break... they say at times we r stones…;)

But wen will d world understand.. A stone is not a stone after all n it has feelings, dreams, n a heart that beats..it pretends not to still deep within It only loves, prays n cares... It really never hates at all….

Lovely poem gIrL..

Keep it up..

Best wishz.. Karan

Excellent write....

I found it very sweet... beautifully written..

"Its the only word that I always hear
That I am strong and have no fear
But they never notice when I am near
That I am not as strong as it appears
Because I break when I see his tears "

^^this stanza reflects a lot of innocence...as well as the sadness within you..

liked it..

Wow...That was more than amazing..The flow was nice and the rhyme as well..
U r a great writer...Keep up the good work:)..
Take Care..