Waiting 4 d chariot... n other stanzas etc.. etc... marvellous poem fren... truly u write differently n I admire ur work..

Keep on writing n thankx for commenting..

Best wishz ... keep writing

Karan

Good job on this piece taking us through your life's journey.

There bloomed lotus
In the pond of our life,
Three sweet daughters,
A son sober and sonorous;
I had in life values all pious,
I set on life without any bias.

I loved this stanza showing the birth of your children. The Lotus and pond of life. Great imagery.

Thus started smooth sailing
On the ocean of life,
Reached many dream lands,
Many cross roads divide,
But always a Light House
Right direction to provide.

If we open our eyes we will cose the right directions in life. We may stumble but will find the way.

Good job!
Take Care Cindy

That was such a beautifully writen piece ,very well done. I agree with Cindy! and I really love this part;

Thus started smooth sailing
On the ocean of life,
Reached many dream lands,
Many cross roads divide,
But always a Light House
Right direction to provide.

I am now struggling
To reach the shore,
I have all hopes,
Still I am not sure,
Whether I shall sink
Or arrive the shore!

Can't waiting you read your new poem.

Big hugs,
Pam

Mr.Sharma,it was great going through your life span.Marvellous imagery.You have proved a poet can say so much in such brevity.
I am touched with the lines:
I shall once again
With my pilot unite.
The final goal of bliss.