You are now a memory my mind ignores
Signed by a girl that will never be yours
U could describe wat I wanted ever to say...I Am really impressed ...keep it up5/5

Sumtimes if u want sumone 2 stand on his/her feet just pretend 2 leave him/her alone... n U can see with ur inspiration itself.. he/she will learn to fall... than by falling they will finally learn 2 fly..

N tat will b d day u will b bit sad... but still u will have a smile on ur face... n u will feel ur being away worked n it worked wonders...

Well written n u r getting better n better with ur writez... keep sharing ur thoughts thru ur poems..

Best wishz...

karan

A marvelous write - straight to the point yet not too harsh to avert the readers attention. Simplicity and flow thoroughly accentuated the underlying feelings. Overall an excellent piece of writing. 5/5

Very nice. The ending is fantastic. This poem has good rhyme and flow. Enjoyed it!

Great job. it says everything right to the point nice flow. keep it up. 5/5

Nice poem.

Wow this poem is really god.=)

The Last Bit Of That Poem Did It For Me
Great Poem!,

Keep It Up
Amazing!!

X

EXCELLENT poem and the ending was perfect,
am sure that man learnt his lesson.

Love this poem hun, especially the last two lines, 5/5 great work sweetie. xx