Hey terra..

i can say that ur poem ( thank you )
is pretty great.. but u need more emotional
words..

keep it up

~shant~

Thanx for your comments... this is one of the very first poems i have ever written... none of my poems are very good... nor did i take a lot of time to write them. this is one of my fav. tho and one of few that i think is pretty good. Keep commenting and giving advice tho. it is very much apprciated.. it will help me to write more poems... as well as possibly help me write better ones in the future. Terra<3