Comments : The walk

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey.. this a very cute ... very sweet poem...
    very beautiful...lovely..

    "We write are name in the sand "
    ^^ well... i think you recheck this line...i think some mistake is dere..

    but overall a very beautiful poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Great poem. wish my relationship was like that, but it's over and done.....his mom even called to verify that one 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spk

    Very nice i like this one the best out of them