Awwww i like it. i wish i could tell my ex that, but im addicted. o well

Very sexy

I gave you every opportunity,
Every chance you could possibly ask for.
And i'm still not the girl you want,
When I've wanted nothing more.

^^this was my favorite stanza. It really grabbed my attention. This is one of your best poems so far. Keep up the great work. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

That was deep. Keep up the good work

Wonder y luv u is in d air still goodbyes come along d poem.....

Anyway a nice poem..

keep it up

Best wishz... Karan

Sweetheart, when you start to miss me,
Remember, it was you who let us die.
These are my last words,
I love you and goodbye

My fav.stanza...
ur poem is really fantastic ..I did like it..keep it up5/5