Aww I felt all the emotion well written!
xo
5/5

Thanks for the feedback. glad you enjoyed it. after editing to make it read smoother, i thought it might have took away some of emotion felt. thanks for reading.

Wow I love the words you used i could really relate and it seemed like it was really came rfom your heart, lots of emotion whether this is really how you feel or not..this is deffinatly goin into my favorites! =)

If my heart didn't cry
there'd be no blood in my veins
fueling this vessel
storing all of my pain

so lovely poem , its philosophical poem , i loved it ,

5/5
Biya

Thank you, and i thought i was past these feelings but today i was wrong. about to write a new 1

This was quite good i loved the title actually really good work xx

Thank you princess, im happy to have pleased you ;)

I liked this poem!! i felt the emotion in it!!! very good

Very emotional i like it

The title is awsome, the poem is great

Hey matey that was fantasticly well written.
thank you so much 4 commenting on my poems :) i don't know how you found me! haha... but thank you :)

I say keep up the writing hun.
ruthie

Its beautifully written........

full of emotions..

good job!!!!!!!

LOVE IT <3

" swallowing my misery
of words unspoke
I'm lying to you
each and every day
with tears i cant cry
and every smile i fake"

i really like this part ... a poem that says every unspoken words

A few people have posted my poem on other websites as their own work and changed the title. ðŸ˜"