Aww
Short but sweet
I liked it :]
good job.

Lovely... short n sweet poem...

Good one, keep writing..

Best wishz..

Karan

Its a good poem
a vote for u
Biya

Nice

Awww!..very sweet!. i totaly love it!
Aly

Sweet, short and simple to read. Sometimes we don't to say more words and being so little it expressed a lot of feelings. :)

Amazing job on this! 5/5

Love without tears cannot be expected
Joy and tears are the two phases of the same coin

Thats what everyone is looking for. ny way nice poem=)

Sweet,Short & Simple

your tender touch that makes me cure,
is all what i want for sure!

^ Maybe change too your tender touch is my cure, it is all i want for sure ...

Other than that its a really cute poem
5/5

Not bad a short one , !! but , if is fair enough , i like free poetry, but you need in it to keep structuring your ryming

free poetry is good ,
but the good ryming one and structured one are the msot one remmbered and they stick in our minds,
your words are beautiful and the metaphores are great ,
jsut , work a little on your lines and edit it

Very good.....i like it...5/5......= )

I like it alot its really deep in nt that many words lovin it