Comments : You're good enough for me

  • 15 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Again. Punctuation. As I said in a previous comment, you need to add periods, commas, etc. where they should go so that the poem is easier to read. Also it would make it easier to find out where one thought begins and ends.

    For me this poem didn't really express any emotions.. I couldn't tell how you are feeling unless I infer which I shouldn't have to do. I suggest selecting better words and maybe adding a bit onto this poem. That way you could have more space to express your feelings..