Comments : Really??!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was kinda sad. Very long but I enjoyed reading this. Good job and I'm sure the other person will love you back

  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Well told and the rythm flows through well mostly(some long lines get rough), I enjoyed this write quite a bit. My opinions follow as I always have some.

    Line 7 "dint"? or "didn't", line 14 I think to change "but" to "and", line 25 change "is" to "are", Lines 29 and 30 don't make sense..perhaps:

    "I guess I'll never know...
    Yet I'll always wonder "