Comments : Things I'll Never Say

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aww! I feel the same way about this guy in my lunch!! Especially the looking and then glancing away part... If only he knew how I felt about him. :P

    This poem was too cute for words. Slide him a note every now and then just to see how his day's been. Hopefully it will work out between you two!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    ARG!!!!!!! the iroooonnnny..it's painful!! ((lmao))

    I look over at him,
    He looks back at me.
    I look away quickly,
    Maybe it was meant to be?

    ^^ flippin....that's my social studies class RIGHT THERE. stupid jake..

    My heart starts to light up,
    But it still has a lot to mend.
    He comes walking over to me,
    And asks for a pen to lend.

    ^^ i love this stanza. it mixes poetic words like hearts lighting up, and every day things...this is truly a beautiful stanza.

    All of my friends giggle,
    Give me a sly little smile.
    They say that if I tell him,
    He'll be mine in a little while.

    ^^ he TOTALLY could be yours. cuz he's in love with you. duh.

    In my next few classes,
    I only daydream about him.
    Then he sits right beside me,
    As we watch a scientific film.

    ^^ this stanza is cute. the flow's a little off, but it's still adorable nonetheless..

    His body is so close to me,
    His elbow right next to mine.
    I slide mine over until we touch,
    Trying to give him some kind of sign.

    ^^ omg. WHO hasn't done this?? i mean, for real. this is so relatable..*mwah* superb!

    Suddenly the bell starts to ring,
    He gets up and walks away.
    I go to the buses in disappointment,
    With all of the things I'll never say

    ^^ oh god oh god oh god oh god....what we don't say is what kills us the most.

    kayla, this poem is beautiful, just like you. 5.5