Well done good work xx

This is amazing it is sad and gut wrenching all in one this part is just jaw droppin

"So next time you take the time to stare , please find my eyes to join with , and slowly approach my fragile body , give me a beautiful reason to live."

I had a close friend that had multiply personaltys and this lines reminds me of her the best but the whole poem does really any how great piece of work 5/5

Tammi,

I thought it was sad, romantic and beautiful all togther... good job

I love it an instant classic. Its both beautiful and full of meaning it touches not only my heart but my soul as well.I made it a five lets hope everybody else thinks the same.

"So next time you take the time to stare , please find my eyes to join with"
Loved it..beautifuuly portrayed..really nice..

"So next time you take the time to stare , please find my eyes to join with , and slowly approach my fragile body , give me a beautiful reason to live. "

love this part :x

This is great poem...I liked it...
nice job...

Pretty sad but beautiful.
it was an awesome write.
keep up the good work. :)