Comments : LOSER

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I can see how deeply you were hurt and what is the meaning of life in your eyes but let me tell you this my friend, if you died you will gain NOTHING but if you continued on living you may get the WORLD in your hand. life is beautiful but tough at the same time and don't say something like :
    "I am worthless, stupid ,fool
    Rubbish, burden in the road
    Why does every body hate me?
    Why don't they accept me?

    I am alone in this dark prison.
    And I shall be alone forever!"

    there is NO ONE who is worthless and not everyone hate you, at least i don't and i care. we care for you and you will find many good friends in this site who will support you.

    so stop attacking yourself and smile even if its fake, you don't know that one day it may come real smile :)

    the poem was nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong ending, good work x

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice poem..I did like how u expressed ur feeling..keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    If you die I'll die cuz I feel the same way and if there is no one in the world left to suffer like me then I have no one to help and relate to and if it's like like then my life is pointless

  • 15 years ago

    by A. M.

    I feel like a loser too.. 5/5 keep it up