A good work. I suggest a small moderationas follows:
An Angel she could be,
As she was God's creation.

You have the talent.

Its a beauti ful poem

Very sweet poem... I really loved it...

"Her hair was sunlit gold,
Her eyes as brown as wood,
Her lips were rosy red,
A angel she could,"

^^ these lines are very beautiful....

very good... keep up..

You are a talented writer. Make sure to stick with it so you keep your skills nice and sharp. This poem was very sweet and touched my heart. 5 out of 5.

Lovely.......good job