God this poem was amazing.
I loved it. and i feel exactly the same way right now. This poem was so deep and it conveyed what you meant so well. Fantastic write!

Amazing poem!! loved it

Wow, amazing job you have done, it flows really quick and moves really well. this is really powerful. keep it up xxxx

Wow. tht was amazing. I feel like that all the time. It's good that I can actually relate to you in this poem.
Good job
5/5

I cant really think of much to say that hasnt been said already, all i can say is that you have so much talent, and that this poem is very well writen. i read it twice in a row, it is so good. keep writing, cant wait to read more.

Another really really good poem.
Very sad, but fantastic.

I loved this part:

My Knees Start To Shake
As I Fall Upon The Floor
Pieces Fall Between The Cracks,
But I Don't Care No More.
I Look Down At My Shirt
As The Stain Stares Back At Me
The Crimson Color Of Defeat
That Only I Can See.
The Hole Deep Inside My Chest
Of Where My Heart Once Was
Now Lies Scattered Around
Just Like It Always Does,

^^
the language and imagery in that is awesome!!!

well done-
another 5/5

Aish