Simple
nice
deep
fullof love
i like it
i enjoy
well done

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Your monologue is full of sincere romance, dreaming of a lover and gaining pleasure out of this dream
well composed.

Beatiful poem.But here I want to answer to one comment by Bangbang that there is no need of light.Because it is a realization of heart that is manifested in these two lines and they do not require any external light.This is really a beautiful poem full of innocent imagination.

Good job! very well written! wish u more talent:)

Wow a very short but sweet magnificient poem i loved the end 5/5

Wow this is a great poem I really liked it and thank you for the advice and it really helped.=)