Comments : Awaitingg the day she truly wants to stay....

  • 16 years ago

    by Jasmina

    Hey.. i enjoyed your poem! Great work 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Since her would turned cold = think that should be world hun xx

    life i nothing but a test = should be is xx

    a quietly prays for the end = and* xx

    love the poem, really powerful and good flow to it, love the title and how it ends is just really good. well done, xxxxx