Aww this poem was really sweet!!!!!!!...i loved it!!!....especially how u kept repeating the "if you were my valentine" i thought that was awsum!!!!
"I cant��t imagine "
^^ i suggest you go back and take those thi ngs off..it kinda disrtracts the reader. it usually hapens when u add appostraphies to ur work...anyways i loved this poem!!
Aly

If you were my valentine
Ia��d find the softest rose
to gently brush against
those sweetest lips, the angels chose
my heart is like a flower
craving for your morning kiss
mere words cannot pay homage
to a passion such as this

these lines were so passionate..........

OMG!! i have never read such a beautiful poem

im mad at it.........

its yeppy good..

keep writting