Crushed. not by u, but by my own weakness.
-best line, so true

I loved
I lusted
I hated
I trusted
I yearned
I hurt
I was burned
I cried
I failed
I am exhausted
Crushed. not by u, but by my own weakness.

loved this ending bit, flowed really fast and made it really heavy. good work xxx

I this ope it really waht i am feeling today. you have a gift and it is so real that makes one cry.5/555555555

WOW I LIKE THIS ONE A LOT IT HAS GREAT FLOW ESPECIALLY AT THE END KEEP IT UP YOU HAVE TALENT =]

The best by far. great poem