Wow.. love it ive been there 5/5 *hugs* great job hun

Very very good

OH my goodness you didnt not deserve to be treated that way......although you did forgive him at times you stuck up for yourself....no gurl deserves to be beat on or degraded....there was a lot of deep emoton in this poem....one mistake instead of waisting it should have been wasted...beautiful poem tho its goin in my favs...
5/5
Amazingly Wonderful!!!!

I loved it!! it was great!! so who was this person that treated you like this!!? i got treated like this and i know it hurts!! amazing poem 5/5

That's good man, i like how at the and you say 'So now she's finally free'. you're a good writer.

Awesome job! 5/5

This was jaw dropping...super job!

THAT WAS AMAZING SO WELL WRITIEN GREAT JOB

Soo good
keep it up

I LIKE IT HAS STRONG FEELINGS AND STUFF...AND IT MAKES SENSE TO...GOOD JOB!!

Intense. Very intense.
You can feel how uncomfortable the situation
really was as you're reading. Wowsaa.
Gave me chills. No lies.

Beautiful write.

Keep it up; you've an amazing talent.

Wow that was great!
It was long, but beautifully written.
it kept me wanting to read more.
i loved it.
keep up the great job
a definite 5

Its a great poem.. it shows great emotion.. keep up the good work

Very good! Well written; tons of emotion. I've been in a situation a little like this before, and I know it hurts. No one should have to be treated that way. Still, fantastic poem =) 5/5

Wow like a little film running through my mind. Loved the emotions and love the times when girls show their strong side. For me the last verse didn't suit very well the rest of the poem, but it's only my opinion.
Overall, I loved it it just captured me and keeped me focused.

Brilliant job. 5/5

I loved it i've been there done that but never nind that you peom was great keep writing

I like the format you used its very unique and I could really relate to the poem...Good job...3/5

I hope that was not your bf.....he would suck!! I give this poem a 5/5!! Great Job!!

Goood ++5/5
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WOW this is really good I loved the meaning of it and the situation is quite familiar.. Your character of her is amazing not many females would do that and for that I say brava.. Great job keep writting.

Beck