I really liked it...=]

Great job.
I love your use of repitition.
Full of emotion.
Keep writing.:)

Good work xxx

AWWWWWWWWWWW thats sad !!!!

Wow... I mean WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
this was amazingly powerful.
I like got chills reading it.
I agree 100% with everything that Danny said,
The images that your words portrayed were
so graphic
it was unbelievable.
Your words are haunting and really made me think about various memories.
You have a stunning style of writing that
really captures the essence of your emotions.
very passionate poem.
Loved it!! keep up the good work!!
Take care

That poem is sooooooooo amazing

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow!! again.. It's so sad and so many emotions..the words u use are great... Nice, Awesome Job.. keep it up with the amazing poems.. Also take care =)

I love this poem!! i give it a 5/5!!!!! booyaaa LOL XD

I thought you a good story line to your poem in which you were basically able to stay on track with instead of going all over the place and random, although the part when it said something on the lines of "blood running down my mouth" or something, that was really a bit random and sort of ruined it a bit. I think if you developed this concept more and then re wrote it, it would be much much better.

Good job. Great amount of feeling put in it.

5/5

Liked the poem...it's really powerful..keep up the great writing!
Laura

This makes me think of tghe Twilight and the Dark Hunter series. They are all about vampires falling in love. This was very well done.

This was so sad. I really love your style. You tell it so plainly..but it left a lasting impression on me. Very nice work. Keep it up. Shanik

Very well written poem, flowed very well. Keep up the good work!

5/5