What a poem n so much pain in it......

Marvellous thought dear friend, it was astounding, Ya sumthings prick hard n harder with time.....

So nicely composed sad poem..

Keep it up..

Best wishes,

Karan

Thats really good, short strong and powerful, good title choice xxx

It's very sad indeed. In your every poem there's a touch of strong and grief. You've written it well. But very sad.

Thats really a deep one with much of sadness, great write

all the best and take care